Monday, November 16, 2009

My new poem about " Love is " ( plz tell me its good or bad )?

Love Is ...





Love is the greatest feeling,


Love is like a play,


Love is what I feel for you,


Each and every day,


Love is like a smile,


Love is like a song,


Love is a great emotion,


That keeps us going strong,


I love you with my heart,


My body and my soul,


I love the way I keep loving,


Like a love I can't control,


So remember when your eyes meet mine,


I love you with all my heart,


And I have poured my entire soul into you,


Right from the very start.

My new poem about " Love is " ( plz tell me its good or bad )?
That is the greatest poem about love i have ever read, Love is so many things. love is like a roller coaster


once the ride starts you cant get off, you want the person so much you hope they say yes, but your not sure, u start thinking about it nonstop u feel defensive and dont trust anybody wen it comes to that person. then wen they say no u panic. the roller coaster tracks become invisible. u dont know when the next rise, drop, or turn is coming up. so u think a drop is coming so u get ready, then a sudden turn comes and hurts u, not a sudden sting of pain. like claws scratching away at ur heart. u feel alone. like nobody understands wat u r going thru, u think because u cant see the track they cant either. but u aren't alone, so many people have ridden the coaster of love be4 u, u just have to find them 4 help.
Reply:Awesome poem man, keep it up!
Reply:wow thats good man props!!! now go make a girls heart melt


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